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The Lost, the Found & the Unknown

A tear shed for the found love,
A tear shed for the love unfound..
And a tear for the lost

A sigh for the found happiness,
one for the glee imagined,
And one for the happiness lost...

A tear for the laughs together,
A tear for the laughter undone,
A tear for the laughters missed

A tear for the lost pride,

One for the ego boosted,

A smile for the worthless vanity,

And a reassurance of the sanity

A regret for the spoken words,

A regret for the words unspoken,

A regret for the words lost

 

A yearning for the tunes unsung,

A yearning for the tunes unheard,

And one for the beats missed..

 

A thought about the lost time,
One for the seconds gained
And one for the hours wasted.. 

A hurt from the friend found,
A hurt from the anonymous..
A hurt for the friend lost..

A smile for the thoughts found,
One for the unfound
And one for the lost thoughts..

 

From the one lost in thoughts..Lost in the unknown..

 


A tear for the lost pride,
One for the ego boosted,
And a smile for the worthless vanity.


A regret for the spoken words,
A regret for the words unspoken,
A regret for the words lost..


A yearning for the tunes unsung,
A yearning for the tunes unheard,
And one for the beats missed..

A thought about the lost time,
One for the seconds gained
And one for the hours wasted..

A hurt from the friend found,
A hurt from the anonymous..
A hurt for the friend lost..

A smile for the thoughts found,
One for the unfound
And one for the lost thoughts..

From the one lost in thoughts..Lost in the unknown.
Rather than shedding a tear for what has gone out your orbit, one should look back in perspective and be grateful for all the good moments. That way one can let go without sustaining damage..... but to get someone entirely out off ur system keep replaying the things you hate about him/her in an endless loop. It usually works...

BTW, Here's something,
Thanks be to the moment you looked at me so true
Thanks be to the night that joined me to you
This youth of mine, it express its gratitude.
As do these undying memories, that remind me of you.

A translation of that beautiful "Nee Paartha" song from Hey Ram. I thought it would fit in here.
Monday, 20 March, 2006 
raka said…
Hey real good poem.
Someone said.
A beautiful thought behind a beautiful line;
A beautiful mind behind a beautiful poem!
Tuesday, 21 March, 2006 
The Devil said…
hey deepthi,

though i havent read your other works in depth, I think I found this rather interesting ...

its very free flowing, very naturally written, you get a 10 (albeit from a no one in the world of poetry) for this :)
Thursday, 23 March, 2006 
BK said…
A truly wonderful poem. Hats off.

"A bow for the poems you have borne,
One for the ones yet unborn,
And a sigh for those that were stillborn."
Wednesday, 29 March, 2006 
sp said…
awesome ! did u pen this?
Wednesday, 05 April, 2006 
deepthi said…
sp,Thanks. yes, I did pen it at some "emotionally turbulent" moment..
bk,thanks for the lovely lines.
raka,thanks for the quote.
devil, a 10 on 10 from you is an honour!thanks :)
thanks Anand!
Thursday, 06 April, 2006 
Ali Thanikkal said…
i never had a chance to comment on a poem before (never had the patience to read through one...-;)) now dat i've done it here... lemme comment tooo :P


a comment for the poems read...
no comment for the poems unread...
why comment for the poems misread...
houz it? -;)
wow!!! now i too can imagine the tickle of creativity you would have experienced after compiling this poem -;))
Tuesday, 02 May, 2006 
frustu soul said…
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Thursday, 13 July, 2006 

frustu soul said…
Superb... Is it inspired by Triveni? Triveni is like triplets, A poem style perhaps started by "Gulzaar".

Good.. If you wanna read more trivenis then try this link :

http://trivenis.blogspot.com/
Thursday, 13 July, 2006 
Lost & Found , Found and Lost, un-Found & un-Lost.
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Anand K said…
Rather than shedding a tear for what has gone out your orbit, one should look back in perspective and be grateful for all the good moments. That way one can let go without sustaining damage..... but to get someone entirely out off ur system keep replaying the things you hate about him/her in an endless loop. It usually works...

BTW, Here's something,
Thanks be to the moment you looked at me so true
Thanks be to the night that joined me to you
This youth of mine, it express its gratitude.
As do these undying memories, that remind me of you.

A translation of that beautiful "Nee Paartha" song from Hey Ram. I thought it would fit in here.
Monday, 20 March, 2006
rākeśvara said…
Hey real good poem.
Someone said.
A beautiful thought behind a beautiful line;
A beautiful mind behind a beautiful poem!
Tuesday, 21 March, 2006
The Devil said…
hey deepthi,

though i havent read your other works in depth, I think I found this rather interesting ...

its very free flowing, very naturally written, you get a 10 (albeit from a no one in the world of poetry) for this :)
Thursday, 23 March, 2006
Anonymous said…
A truly wonderful poem. Hats off.

"A bow for the poems you have borne,
One for the ones yet unborn,
And a sigh for those that were stillborn."
Wednesday, 29 March, 2006
sp said…
awesome ! did u pen this?
Wednesday, 05 April, 2006
deepthi said…
sp,Thanks. yes, I did pen it at some "emotionally turbulent" moment..
bk,thanks for the lovely lines.
raka,thanks for the quote.
devil, a 10 on 10 from you is an honour!thanks :)
thanks Anand!
Thursday, 06 April, 2006
Ali Thanikkal said…
i never had a chance to comment on a poem before (never had the patience to read through one...-;)) now dat i've done it here... lemme comment tooo :P


a comment for the poems read...
no comment for the poems unread...
why comment for the poems misread...

houz it? -;)
wow!!! now i too can imagine the tickle of creativity you would have experienced after compiling this poem -;))
Tuesday, 02 May, 2006
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