A tear
shed for the found love,
A tear shed for the love unfound..
And a tear for the lost
A sigh for
the found happiness,
one for the glee imagined,
And one for the happiness lost...
A tear for
the laughs together,
A tear for the laughter undone,
A tear for the laughters missed
A tear for the lost pride,
One for the ego boosted,
A smile for the worthless
vanity,
And a reassurance of the sanity
A regret for the spoken
words,
A regret for the words unspoken,
A regret for the words lost
A yearning for the tunes
unsung,
A yearning for the tunes
unheard,
And one for the beats
missed..
A thought
about the lost time,
One for the seconds gained
And one for the hours wasted..
A hurt
from the friend found,
A hurt from the anonymous..
A hurt for the friend lost..
A smile
for the thoughts found,
One for the unfound
And one for the lost thoughts..
From the
one lost in thoughts..Lost in the unknown..
A tear for the lost pride,
One for the ego boosted,
And a smile for the worthless vanity.
A regret for the spoken words,
A regret for the words unspoken,
A regret for the words lost..
A yearning for the tunes unsung,
A yearning for the tunes unheard,
And one for the beats missed..
A thought about the lost time,
One for the seconds gained
And one for the hours wasted..
A hurt from the friend found,
A hurt from the anonymous..
A hurt for the friend lost..
A smile for the thoughts found,
One for the unfound
And one for the lost thoughts..
From the one lost in thoughts..Lost in the unknown.
Someone said.
A beautiful thought behind a beautiful line;
A beautiful mind behind a beautiful poem!
though i havent read your other works in depth, I think I found this rather interesting ...
its very free flowing, very naturally written, you get a 10 (albeit from a no one in the world of poetry) for this :)
"A bow for the poems you have borne,
One for the ones yet unborn,
And a sigh for those that were stillborn."
bk,thanks for the lovely lines.
raka,thanks for the quote.
devil, a 10 on 10 from you is an honour!thanks :)
thanks Anand!
a comment for the poems read...
no comment for the poems unread...
why comment for the poems misread...
houz it? -;)
wow!!! now i too can imagine the tickle of creativity you would have experienced after compiling this poem -;))
Good.. If you wanna read more trivenis then try this link :
http://trivenis.blogspot.com/
BTW, Here's something,
Thanks be to the moment you looked at me so true
Thanks be to the night that joined me to you
This youth of mine, it express its gratitude.
As do these undying memories, that remind me of you.
A translation of that beautiful "Nee Paartha" song from Hey Ram. I thought it would fit in here.